2020年全国新东方在线英语写作培训范文（写作提高方法）
语言的优化需要不断的积累和练习，多记多练，不断扩充自己的语料库，唯有如此，文章才会写的越来越漂亮。2020年全国新东方在线英语写作培训范文（写作提高方法）。
A or DA: Governments should focus its budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development.
题型：呼吁题
论点：一边倒(同意)
论证角度：利弊分析
开头：同意政府应该把财政预算更多地放在环保上。(话题引入+双方观点呈现+我方观点及过渡句)
The past several decades have witnessed that the world’s economy is booming. Modern skyscrapers, convenient communications, fast transportations make it easier and cozier for people to live in this planet. However, people are beginning to realize that the great achievements today seem to be at the price of destroying the nature. They claim that governments should focus its budgets more on environment than on economic development. As for me, I am a big fan of environmental protection and I am wholeheartedly in agreement with this claim. Here are some reasons and examples to support my view.
中间段1：环境保护关系到每一个人的健康问题。(主题句+解释+细节化展开)
First, the environmental protection is closely bound up with the health of every single person in this world. If the environment is polluted, the basic elements people need to survive must be affected, and thus disastrous results may occur. Recently I have read an appalling fact from newspapers that there is a village in the center of China where the majority of its residents, including kids and seniors, suffer from cancer such as lung cancer, stomach cancer and lymph cancer. The investigator found that the villagers’ drinking water is from a river that is severely contaminated by the industrial discharges of enterprises located at the upstream.
中间段2：经济的可持续发展需要以环境保护为前提，我们不能竭泽而渔。(主题句+解释+细节和展开)
In addition, the environmental protection is conducive to the sustainability of economic development. There are some idioms in China, “killing the hens for the egg”, “draining the pond for the fish”, and “burning the woods for the prey”. These ancient wisdoms warn modern people not to gain profits at present without thinking of the future. In other words, we cannot simply satisfy the need of contemporary people regardless of the interest of our next generation. Imagine that if we were in excessive pursuit of economic development by consuming all the natural resources, hunting for precious animals mercilessly and cut down forests, what will become of our descendants?
中间段3：环境保护可以在一定程度上刺激经济的发展，比如可以发展旅游业。(主题句+解释+细节展开)
Last but not least, the environmental protection can boost the development of economy at the same time. For instance, a country that emphasizes on its environment must be a country famous for its sightseeing industry. I have been to Singapore in which I am not only amazed by its prosperous economy but also by its garden-like environment. The lawns, the trees, the rivers are beautifully designed to fit into the city. This case well illustrates that the economic development and environmental protection sometimes construct no conflicts between each other.
结尾：重申观点+归纳理由/升化主题。
To put it into nutshell, governments should put its budgets on environmental protection than on economic development. In the process of achieving more prosperous economy, people should sometimes stop to think about whether the world we live could provide fresh air, clean water and healthy food, for these are fundamentally vital to the fate of human beings.
提高英语写作的方法如下：
分三个步骤，第一步：以译促写。找一篇英文范文，把它翻译成汉语，然后对照汉语，自己把它翻译成英语。最后，将自己翻译的英语与最初的范文进行对比，寻找差距。在这个比较和批注的过程中不断完善提高英语写作。并且学习范文中地道的表达。
第二步：将自己的翻译与范文静心地思考并找出译文和范文的差异。学习范文文本的起承转合的技巧，学习范文文本长句短句的错落交叉，学习范文文本的精确用词。
第三步：背诵范文。不可以直接背，一定要在做了上面第一二步后再背诵。
以上三个步骤是学习英语写作的基本方法。在学习完一篇文章后还要精细的做文章分析工作。这样才能有效的提高写作能力。
2020年全国新东方在线英语写作培训范文（写作提高方法）。写作的过程一定要积累表达精准的词汇，然后慢慢提高自己写作的用词准确性。这样写作的文章才会变得高级起来。
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